You have made a good start but I am a little concerned that this is all pasted and none of it is your own work. I am happy for some information to be referenced but you must complete some of it yourself. Go back and add the pros and cons list in your own words to show that you understand what we have been looking at, you need to include how the technology is interactive and also the advantages and disadvantages for each. I know work will take you a little longer as you are thinking very hard about your English but take your time and ensure that you are always handing in work that you have done yourself.
Imi,
ReplyDeleteYou have made a good start but I am a little concerned that this is all pasted and none of it is your own work. I am happy for some information to be referenced but you must complete some of it yourself. Go back and add the pros and cons list in your own words to show that you understand what we have been looking at, you need to include how the technology is interactive and also the advantages and disadvantages for each. I know work will take you a little longer as you are thinking very hard about your English but take your time and ensure that you are always handing in work that you have done yourself.
Ellie